Story Spotlight (Volume III): Treasure Has Tiny Feet
Let me introduce you to the first story in my next book Whakataukī Among the Stars, Volume III: Treasure Has Tiny
Feet.
Every
story in Whakataukī Among the Stars, Volume III begins with an old truth
and then asks what happens when human beings, being human beings, meet it under
pressure.
“Treasure
Has Tiny Feet” begins in a frontier colony where a child slips beyond the
perimeter and into first contact.
Set
in a young off-world settlement tucked into a valley of basalt pillars, salt
flats, glass-forests, and wary alien life, the story follows four-year-old
Niko, who wanders outside the colony, befriends a glowdog, and stumbles upon an
ancient alien structure that responds not to force, authority, or expertise,
but to gentleness.
Sometimes
the first person to understand a new world is the one everyone else is trying
to protect from it.
That
is the heart of this story: not alien mystery or colonial peril, but the
preciousness of life, the moral seriousness of care, and the startling power of
innocence when it meets the unknown without cruelty.
The
Whakataukī: ‘He taonga te tamaiti, he taonga te oranga’
Translation:
A child is a treasure,
life is a treasure
This
whakataukī sits at the centre of the story like a quiet hand on the shoulder.
Its
meaning is simple, profound, and utterly unsentimental: children are not
incidental to life; they are part of what gives life its worth. To treasure a
child is to treasure life itself.
It
speaks to aroha, manaakitanga, collective care, humility, and the deep
responsibility we carry for one another.
And
that makes it a natural fit for this story, which is ultimately concerned with
what a community truly values when fear, urgency, and the unknown press in.
What
the Story Explores
At
one level, this is a story about a small child wandering beyond the safety of a
colony perimeter, meeting an alien creature, and awakening an ancient artefact
while the adults scramble to find her.
But
beneath that, it is also about care, belonging, trust, first contact, and the
ways adults forget what children often know instinctively: that life must be
met with relationship before it can be met with explanation.
Niko
is not some polished little prodigy or mystical chosen child. She is small,
curious, literal, funny, trusting, and gloriously herself. She is four years
old in the full cosmic sense of the thing: all wonder, no bureaucracy.
That
matters.
Because
one of the things this story understands is that human survival has never
depended only on systems, rules, or technical competence. It also depends on
tenderness, shared responsibility, and the ability to recognise value before
usefulness.
The
emotional architecture of the story rests on that contrast. The colony is
practical, competent, frightened, procedural. It has alarms, sensors, binders,
command structures, and all the anxious machinery of survival. Niko has a
scarf, a fish-mask, two biscuits, and the disarming habit of saying hello. The
story honours both realities. It does not sneer at adult caution, because the
danger is real. But neither does it mistake caution for wisdom. It quietly
insists that a civilisation can build domes, ration air, catalogue species, and
still miss the most important thing if it forgets how to meet the living world
with gentleness.
It
also understands something harder: love does not cancel danger, and relief does
not erase cost. Asha’s panic is real. The colony’s fear is justified. The child
was genuinely at risk. The story does not lie about that. It lets the truth
stay complicated. A child can be wondrous and fragile at the same time. A
community can be loving and still built on systems that do not know how to
listen. That tension gives the story its bite.
Why
It Belongs in Volume III
If
Volume III is about endurance, community, and what remains human under
pressure, then “Treasure Has Tiny Feet” belongs there for very good
reason.
This is a story about a colony under strain being forced to remember what survival is actually for. And still, the child, the proverb, and the instinct to care endure.
That
is where the whakataukī bites deepest.
Because
the world of the story is full of things that claim importance — protocols,
perimeter alarms, official logic, xenotech analysis, colony procedure, and the
grinding practicalities of staying alive on a hostile world — but the proverb
cuts through all of it.
The
thing that matters here is not control.
It
is not efficiency.
It
is not even discovery for its own sake.
It
is the recognition that life is sacred before it is useful, and that the future
will be shaped not only by what humanity builds, but by how gently it learns to
greet what it did not create.
A
Story with Quiet Humour and Deep Humanity
For
all its tension, danger, and awe, this story is not bleak, cold, or
self-important.
It
carries warmth, wryness, and comic tenderness in exactly the right places.
That matters too. Because in this story, humour is not decoration. It is part of survival, intimacy, and culture.
The
jokes do real work. They expose bureaucracy without flattening it into
caricature. They humanise the colony, making it feel lived in rather than
staged. The ration-pack font that looks like it charges rent, the emergency
procedures somehow smudged with peanut butter, the official alert name bloated
into bureaucratic absurdity, the engineers’ belief that all problems can be
solved by more beeping — all of it keeps the story honest. Hard futures without
humour tend to become pompous very quickly, and pompous science fiction is a
long, cold walk for very little reward.
Here,
the humour keeps the world breathable. It reminds us that even on an alien
frontier, people are still people: tired, worried, loving, ridiculous, and
occasionally held together by sarcasm and sheer stubbornness.
And
Niko’s own logic is part of that texture too. She is funny because children
often are: not by telling jokes, but by seeing the world with absolute
seriousness from an angle adults have forgotten how to reach.
Very
few things feel more true than that.
Why
I Love This One
That
is what I love most about “Treasure Has Tiny Feet.” It takes an old
truth, sets it inside a hard future, and lets it prove itself.
Not
with spectacle, slogans, easy heroics, or neat moral speeches.
But
with a blue scarf, a fish-mask, an offered biscuit, and a child saying hello to
the unknown as though courtesy might matter there too.
And
in a world obsessed with systems, too proud to listen, and forever in danger of
mistaking management for wisdom, that feels like the kind of mercy and truth
worth carrying forward.
—
Rebecca

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